concept

this is a concept I was writing for my film final. what you are a bout to read is a concept being written right in front of you. as i typed, it was being created. so the first thing you will read is an attempt of writing it then the next is a finished concept that is not as detailed. after that, it is a one sentence concept then the start of the script.




A 17 year old boy named Charlie lives in a respected family. His parents die (for some reason I have yet to figure out) and he is left to fend for himself. His girlfriend tells him that she is going to have his child and he panics. The house that his parents own is getting taken away from him and he doesnt think he is ready for a child so he leaves home and is walking for a few weeks when he comes across a group of traveling gypsys. They take him under their wing and he travels with them. They teach him how to play the guitar n the ways of the world. He falls in love with a gypsy girl named_____ After a year living with them they end up in a big city. One night he gets separated from them and he is left to fend himself in the city where he lived on the streets. The only thing he has with him is a guitar. He plays guitar for food; one day a guy about his age comes up to him and tells asks him if he wrote the song he was playing. He says yes it is. The
boy asks, would you like to be in a band. Charlie thin and feeble. The boy says why don't you come with me and I will get you some food....would you like that? We can talk some more after that. So Charlie gets up n walks with him to a near by restant. As they are waiting for their food, the boy says my name is thomas and he is starting a band. He went on to say that he would get a place to stay and food to eat. After they eat Thomas asks so what do you think? Wanna meet the rest of the group? Charlie agrees to so they leave the place. When thomas and Charlie got to their destination, Thomas lead him into the run down house. One of the guys came out of one of the bedrooms looking blery eyed and asked who "he" was. Thomas explained to him that charlie was the new guitarist and introduced the other guy, ryan to Charlie. The band started to practce songs; while Charlie and Thomas wrote songs and got closer...


There is a guy whos parents die so he runs away from the pain n nocks his girlfriend up. Then the house his parents owned is getting taken away n he doesnt want to be a father so he runs away from there n finds some gypsies where he falls in love with a girl. She wants to get married n that freaks him out so he leaves n ends up in a big city. He lives on the street n plays guitar for food. A guy his age asks him to join his band n he does. He starts to do skag n tries to run away from himself. He gets another girl nocked up n he leaves to go back home and ends up back in his old town so he disides to see his first girlfriend. He can't find her so he asks a lady if she still lives there. The lady asks why he is looking for her. She then says that the girl died a few years ago when her boyfriend disapered and left her with child. She could not bear it so she killed her self while the child was still not born. The guy is freaked out because he realizes
that it is his fault for her n the child's death so he goes back to his girlfriend that is about to have his child and marries her n changes his life.

in 1 setances: it is about a young guy who runs away from every thing when times get a little bit hard so in the end he changes his life and bears with it.

A slow pan of a piano and stops on a man playing pasionatly. He is about the age of 17. Charles is his name. He is wearing a suit as the song ends, a girl walks in and leans on the piano saying "aw Charlie, that's so pretty!" he plays the last note and looks up at her. She then goes over to him and hugs him, as he puts his arms around her, he looks into her eyes and says "its not finished yet..." he kisses her neck "but when its done, its for you." then he kisses her again.